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星野維
感謝大大的心得。
大大給的觀後感真的很中肯，前期的戰鬥比例是真的比較多，有些部分，例如回憶的部分，我也有在後面的章節進行改善。
由於第一次寫，那時真的只能憑感覺跟想像來寫，粗糙感很重。我有看大大的作品，是真的很順，寫得很好，大大的感想與建議我也會銘記於心，並持續寫出更好的作品。
最後祝大大新年快樂！
5 months agoReply
小魚一尾
也祝你新年快樂～
5 months agoReply
小魚一尾
@星野維
5 months agoReply
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