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E先 sponsored 500coins for Issue 51!
謝謝DUCE的義大利麵，實在太美味啦！！受益良多！！


對於沒有吸引到你，著實有些太可惜了Orz


你的回饋，真是觸動我心，作者一直找不到進步的方向！！


另外關於劇情很水的部分，可能是我習慣埋入一些伏筆，讓劇情進展變得緩慢。


味道平淡的紅豆肉醬義大利麵麵，我想要再加一些佐料鋪墊，加點辣椒、糖果、再灑點起司...等，讓整道菜變得更詭異，錯綜複雜，撲朔迷離XD

1 year agoReply
DUCE
前輩不必感到可惜啦，畢竟已經有另一部作品，都可以寫道100多篇章了，想必已經對寫作很有心得了。
這篇只是個人的心得而已，如果對前輩有用的話那是最好了！
1 year agoReply
DUCE
@E先
1 year agoReply
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