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行姝
非常謝謝詳盡的評語。
雖然喜歡寫內心戲，但也明白這樣寫得太拖沓，和輕小說調性不合。
簡介也是我想更改的部分，想更符合整體故事走向。
再次感謝舉辦這麼佛心的活動。
8 months agoReply
不眠草
感謝大大參與♡♡♡ 
8 months agoReply
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