I love the story behind the words, it was a very beautiful piece to read. I can feel the passion of the words in your writing. I like how you used many different words and made it short and simple. It really makes me appreciate humans a lot more. :)
Awwh, I’m really glad you saw what I saw when I was writing this! The characters (Alfred and Rook) are actually from the book I am currently writing and hopefully will turn into a novel. It’s on my profike if you want to read, it’s about a sci-fi dystopian future with lots of real world elements such as war and famine, also a couple of other elements, just with a twist of science fiction. This also includes mental and physical issues not getting in the way of characters, plus diverse ethnic and LGBTQ.
So yeah, you might enjoy it once it gets going.