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Musesation
AHHHH THE FEELS... Awesome! The bit of action was also really good! And I like how you added that bit of the monologue that every villain seems to do once a day.
Emma Bois
Thank so much! Yes, I absolutely hate it in those kinds of movies where the villains monologue, but at least it gives the good guys an opening, right?
WordyKite
I like ho you made Emma a present than doing the standard gift in a box.
WordyKite
This was a sweet one. The emotion, the inner conflict going through Emma as she races to make it for Christmas, and loyal Joseph, who waits for his sister against the odds. Kudos to you.
Emma Bois
Thank you so much!
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