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鯨雨靜瑜
異世界的記憶， 這個很懸。
4 years agoReply
Nox C
對異世界而言，我們這邊的世界才是異世界啊
4 years agoReply
鯨雨靜瑜
@Nox C, 對呀
4 years agoReply
餅乾
總覺得在這裡合適的「說話」改為「詞語」比較順暢些......
5 years agoReply
Nox C
你是說那一段？
5 years agoReply
餅乾
@Nox,最後一段咯，「艾莉娜蹲下來想給梓承一點鼓勵，可是卻一時之間找不到任何合適的說話。」這邊٩(｡・ω・｡)و

怎麼說哩，雖然可以理解這句是在表達「找不到合適的說詞」的意思，不過總覺得「說話」這個詞用在這裡有些不太通順，因為言語通常是由詞語來組合而成的，而說話這個詞在我的印象中多用於在形容動作，所以才提出了這個建議......
5 years agoReply
Tadashi
@餅乾, ［亂入］或者改成話語？［/亂入］
5 years agoReply
Nox C
@中二病末期, 😅 可能這是香港和台灣之間書面語的差別？「說詞」感覺比較官腔，很正規的外交情況那種？感覺「話語」比較常見。或者改成話語比較好吧？
5 years agoReply
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