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嗨~星羽我是來給心得的XDD（完全放棄評文了這人

就劇情方面來說就是可愛的小乙為了刺激阿虎而跑去站街，成功的讓阿虎被誘惑成功的故事XDD

感覺星羽的詞彙都用得很優美，但偶爾有些詞用在一起就會顯得突兀，也會有堆疊的感覺，但沒關係！因為是小黃文！（閉嘴
而且還可以看到星羽打到放飛自我的地方，非常可愛XDDD

不過我有個小建議，如果是想要表達阿虎在心裡想的話，可以用（）括弧喔！

然後這整篇真的都很甜！祝你寫作順利、靈感不絕哦！(´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)
6 years agoReply
星羽
我第一次喺呢一度有回應，閱讀心得！十分感謝！你也加油啊啊啊啊！！！
6 years agoReply
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感謝星羽的參加了~╰(*°▽°*)╯
我家人有在看慶餘年，只有我沒有很完整的觀看體驗XD（欸

這一篇同人的肉很香，但想請星羽在標題標上R18喔！
抱歉我忘記在簡介那邊提醒了> <（跪
6 years agoReply
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