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寫的挺精彩的，但覺得這一類的擂台賽，確實是難以描述，打鬥的場景畫面也很熱血，加上音樂，代表你這次很用心。

該不會你其實也會打吧？😂

後頭還補充了影片，這樣就夠淺顯易懂了。

不過我還是想說，如果可以，希望你的字不要那麼擠，我可能會看的更起勁。

那麼，感謝你再次的參與系列創挑，希望下一回再接著😊
6 years agoReply
兀心
我沒辦法打，所以只能紙上談兵ＸＤＤＤＤ



排版真的是我現在的死穴，我暫時先試著把行距拉開看看。


6 years agoReply
節奏好像在看拳願阿修羅似的，真刺激ww
6 years agoReply
兀心
可惜沒有人大喊我是絞殺王小Ｏ宙（欸
6 years agoReply
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