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艾瑞卡(Erica)
感覺很噁心(￣▽￣)

不錯不錯！蟲那邊的場景可以在多描寫一點，讓它更噁心，這樣才能觸動人心！
寫好一本小說最重要的就是要讓人有一種「心動的感覺」！加油吧！(≧▽≦)

寫作愉快！！！╮ (￣ 3￣) ╭
7 years agoReply
簡潔
嗯，是的，應該再仔細描述，那些蟲有前臂那樣大的，真的有夢到耶！
7 years agoReply
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