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穹葉
噗哈哈哈哈，賣火柴的小師傅wwww
8 years agoReply
不日的基特
仿《賣火柴的小女孩》www
8 years agoReply
穹葉
@野原小基特.,感謝基特把師傅的未完不待續寫完了XDDDD也算了結了我心頭的一根刺（咦w
8 years agoReply
不日的基特
@穹葉,嘻，可是這樣一來師傅真正的待續就沒了，而且我竟然把一個美麗的少女配給了師傅ԅ(✧_✧ԅ)覺得自己真是❤美啊哈哈
8 years agoReply
穹葉
@野原小基特.,人太好XDDDD
8 years agoReply
師傅
@野原小基特.,（亂入）我本來就有女票hahahhhh
8 years agoReply
不日的基特
@師傅,⊙∀⊙！？那我給你換個帥哥好嗎ԅ(✧_✧ԅ)？
8 years agoReply
師傅
@野原小基特.,……敬謝不敏= =……
8 years agoReply
師傅
很好，滿分👏完美體現出師傅的英俊瀟灑、風流倜儻、玉樹臨風、機智聰明。
我還以為你是發在留言區裡:-D
不過你竟然還續寫到符合本創挑要求，是挺不錯的。
8 years agoReply
不日的基特
謝謝(///ω///)師傅你真是誇自己誇得一點都不害臊啊哈哈
8 years agoReply
不日的基特
不過為了故事更順暢我修改了一下你寫的那個開頭，希望你不要介意哦(ˊ˘ˋ*)♡
8 years agoReply
師傅
@野原小基特.,哦沒事，故事至上（笑）
8 years agoReply
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