Well, I sure hope you revisit this and continue it. It has such potential. I would like to read more of it. Besides some tense errors and the need for character development it is a great read. Please continue it. :)
Thank you so much Tigerlily for reading and taking the time to leave your comments. Eldritch was one of my first novel projects that has been left for years. Chances of it ever getting resurrected are pretty slim as I am currently working on my film career. Actually everything else on the "writing a novel" department has been stalled cause I'm working on making short films this year.
I look back at this story now and wow what 5 years can do to a person. My writing here is still very... amateurish? Probably not the right word.
If anything, I can recommend you to read my more recent work on here called "Glory", It's a much improved style of writing and it probably has everything you are looking for like character development and a thrilling plot. With that story, I got farther into writing.
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I look back at this story now and wow what 5 years can do to a person. My writing here is still very... amateurish? Probably not the right word.
If anything, I can recommend you to read my more recent work on here called "Glory", It's a much improved style of writing and it probably has everything you are looking for like character development and a thrilling plot. With that story, I got farther into writing.
Thanks again! I'm happy you enjoyed this story.