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瀧介
輕鬆的情節是很好的，就像你這篇一樣，些許加分，但扣分的地方是，你是第二次參與挑戰的人，所以第二次創挑的規定部分，你少寫了很多。

例如，加入的人類壞人沒有出現，犧牲的人也沒有出現，還有加入的殭屍BOSS也沒有出現，這三個很重要，要不要考慮重新改過在加入?

如果改好了在跟我說，會重新加分😄

感謝你的參與。
8 years agoReply
璇舞
你可以先把我這篇砍掉，明天我再重寫
8 years agoReply
瀧介
@璇舞,沒關係，就留著吧
8 years agoReply
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