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面具
非常感謝欣賞，面具繼續努力。
8 years agoReply
兀心
工作辛苦啦，下次也加油～
8 years agoReply
JUST‧TANK
預期中的改寫是怎樣的呢？很好奇哦…

下次題目要出得比參與者的文章還要講究？
8 years agoReply
兀心
嘛，我是不希望大家只是照搬短片內容，把影像翻譯成文字而已。比較想看到的是用文字表現相似情境（氣氛）的仿寫，但我沒說清楚所以是我的錯OTZ
8 years agoReply
JUST‧TANK
@兀心,出個題目都出得如此心煩啊？
像我的話，隨意出就好了~
8 years agoReply
兀心
@羅倫亞,還好吧，又不是很複雜的事情wwww
8 years agoReply
JUST‧TANK
@兀心,我感覺你對自己出的題目要求太高了。
8 years agoReply
兀心
@羅倫亞,想說就嘗試看看嘛，失敗的話大不了下次再來www
8 years agoReply
我媽
謝謝謝謝！但是看看完了結語... 總覺得這個徽章拿的很心虛啊(|||ﾟдﾟ)
指出的不足，我也虛心接受瞭。。
8 years agoReply
兀心
不會啦，不用心虛，作品好壞這種東西很主觀的～都有天時地利人和的ＸＤＤＤ
8 years agoReply
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