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冥玥綾
感謝您寶貴的意見喔~
8 years agoReply
冷水
是寫的不錯，不過題目是古文呦。
去掉這一點就很好了。
文筆稱的上細膩，不過畫面沒有呈現的很清楚。
整體看上去還是大大的給一個讚！
8 years agoReply
冷水
畫面沒清楚的地方是後段，可以多加一些寫景與動作，應該會更凸顯唯美的氣氛
8 years agoReply
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