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滄藍
哈，其實沒有關係，只要文中有提到那三個字詞，要怎麼用都可以的XD

主角的情感描寫很紮實，一見鍾情大概就是這樣吧？寫相遇再到分離，短短的篇幅中有微微的暖度，加上守護神模型的些微奇幻成分，讀起來有點像是現代都市童話，邂逅帶點童趣，也是浪漫。
8 years agoReply
青山鳥
謝謝滄大的評論，其實我只是想寫單純的愛情故事。

奇幻部分只是小插曲。
8 years agoReply
滄藍
別客氣，也謝謝你來投稿囉
8 years agoReply
青山鳥
@滄藍,有時間可能會再投稿的Xp
8 years agoReply
滄藍
 沒問題！
8 years agoReply
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