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故事背景好有趣，關於機械的這種故事也不多見呢，先書籤觀望後續XD

對了，句末還是加個句點做個區隔會比較好唷，雖然我讀起來還是可以捉摸斷句，但還是有點小困擾就是了XD
8 years agoReply
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謝謝!!!!
好的，其實我最近也在想要不要加個句點//
希望你會喜歡這個故事!!
8 years agoReply
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滿心期待唷XD
加油加油~
8 years agoReply
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