Thanks for the comment! I wasn't really sure what to write in this scene. It is a really sad scene lol so it was hard to write, to begin with. There is a lot going on for them, so i plan to make it longer in the next scene. I wanted it to be deep but concise, not too much sadness but get the message across completely. But i am open to suggestions for anything to add, of course
*I missed this reply from you. Hehehe.* I understand why now. Yeah you're right. It's completely the author's right to do it. Hahaha. No, I don't have any suggestion. This is too good already. 😁
Oooohhhh the message is very strong and deep. You put it in a very nice way I can even relate to it. The feeling to be comforted and to comfort others. That's when God's grace and love easily touch people's heart.
I understand why now. Yeah you're right. It's completely the author's right to do it. Hahaha. No, I don't have any suggestion. This is too good already. 😁
But, why is it so short? 😕 hehe