Luke and Lyon seemed like humans with their relaxing manner and playful banter. And that's a compliment :) Good job in developing the characters and story flow! I'm wondering what's gonna happen at the gala OR will there be a little 'something something' between Luke and Rosie? Haha
That grandmother sounds so much like mine! ...loving the banter. I suck at banter, but you seem to have it flowing well enough! You're getting a whole lot better at describing facial expressions! Keep going ^_^
@madwoman-with-a-pen, um, I don't mind! See what appeals to you I guess? ^_^ A crow's Whisper or A rebels Heart are generally fun to check out :)
You're welcome! I like to acknowledge talent :)
Good job in developing the characters and story flow! I'm wondering what's gonna happen at the gala OR will there be a little 'something something' between Luke and Rosie? Haha
You're welcome! I like to acknowledge talent :)