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Luke and Lyon seemed like humans with their relaxing manner and playful banter. And that's a compliment :)
Good job in developing the characters and story flow! I'm wondering what's gonna happen at the gala OR will there be a little 'something something' between Luke and Rosie? Haha

10 years agoReply

madwoman-with-a-pen

haha ;) I'm glad you enjoyed!!!

10 years agoReply

Bluemoon Scriptor

That grandmother sounds so much like mine! ...loving the banter. I suck at banter, but you seem to have it flowing well enough! You're getting a whole lot better at describing facial expressions! Keep going ^_^

10 years agoReply

madwoman-with-a-pen

Thank you for all the comments!!! I'm glad you're enjoying :) Are there any stories of yours that you'd like me to read?

10 years agoReply

Bluemoon Scriptor

@madwoman-with-a-pen, um, I don't mind! See what appeals to you I guess? ^_^ A crow's Whisper or A rebels Heart are generally fun to check out :)
You're welcome! I like to acknowledge talent :)

10 years agoReply

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