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雪晴 sponsored 100coins for Issue 5!
7 hours agoReply
神武
我很喜歡這個作品，腦海才會有那麼多畫面，可能自己也一直想自己的故事情節，所以有感而發。
3 days agoReply
雪晴
謝謝你的喜歡，歡迎你可以看下去喔。
3 days agoReply
雪晴
謝謝你的建議， 因為這部作品是本人第一次比較完整的作品，它前期為了營造那種冷硬的感覺所以會忽略了一點細節。也歡迎你繼續看下去，後面我覺得劇情來說會相對精彩一些，雖然文筆不會有太大的改善就是了。

這麼作品對我來說是一個抒發口吧，我想像的時候沒有太壓抑，但好像還是有很多不足就是了。
謝謝你寫了這麼多。
3 days agoReply
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