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人一個
這裏可以分享一段「見過的經歷」。如果天台的情節，是透過一杯葉知秋喝過的外賣咖啡，而杯上剛好印上她的唇印；之後周蔓在旁邊漫不經心地拿起那杯咖啡來喝，透過這個動作情景，含蓄地來默認她們兩個確認的關係，那將會是更浪漫，更能夠回應「明知故犯」那一篇章的最後情節。

你寫得很好，只是我個人意見。喜歡你的故事。
5 hours agoReply
狡猾西米露
謝謝你的喜歡和意見喔~我也覺得這是一個很好的表達方式。我會學習用在其他作品裏的‼️
4 hours agoReply
人一個
@狡猾西米露,你這輯小說，是我這𥚃第一部正式讀完的作品。因為故事篇幅不長，對我這個懶散而又太多嗜好的人來說，絕對是一部輕鬆小品。很窩心，但不會傷感。值得欣賞。
4 hours agoReply
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