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隱青
一開始看會以為是很標準的「為愛付出型異國戀」，結果越看越不太對勁，那種過度投入、甚至有點自我說服的感覺，其實有慢慢鋪出來。

最後一句「這個新的，好像不錯」真的很關鍵，直接把整個人設翻出來，有點偏執又有點空掉，會讓人背後涼一下。
1 month agoReply
羊
謝謝版主認真的點評，只是想在一眾比較悲傷的作品中，稍微插科打諢一下XD。題目很有趣，也很謝謝版主開這個活動。
1 month agoReply
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