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大秦書說人
依照在下來看，其實不會過滿，就連段落都有空格不會每段都連在一起，有點問題就是人名連著看有些累贅，建議改成他之後幾次再換回人名
建議作者在作品前面要寫個設定之類的，在下是不知道沒玩過戰鎚的會怎麼想，可能需要先理解背景設定，畢竟那個混亂的世界比較吃設定一點
希望蘇某的建議能幫到閣下
5 months agoReply
車理小龜
我看到之前的意思是戰鬥太多，李明的思緒太少(不是分段問題啦XD)人名問題我再看看怎修改.....至於設定我真的要再研究怎在不劇透的情況下簡單地解說
4 months agoReply
車理小龜
順便一問，是看到那一章停下的?
4 months agoReply
DUCE
@車理小龜,話說話說前輩，40k裡面看到中式名字是真的滿特別的hmm

可能看習慣了所以不習慣
4 months agoReply
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