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小邁
謝謝評價！
很多讀者被我的字數嚇退了🤣嗯嗯，一章有1-2萬多字，相當於其他作品7、8章了。
前面故事會很抓馬，後面就看女主怎麼在這堆抓馬中調解……？不喜歡狗血的應該是看不下去，謝謝你還是有看完一章🙏（有吧有吧，既然你都知道女主不想退學了，起碼過大半了）
至於女主不願意退學嘛，如果她退學故事就繼續不下去了！當然，我在寫的時候也試圖說服我自己，妲雖然怕事，但她也不捨得自己的努力付諸東流。而且，她心裡，還是有僥倖——覺得是自己誤會了，覺得男友不是真有殺意。
但看來我沒成功說服讀者😫這方面我要努力啊TTTT
4 months agoReply
白老鼠
一章1、2萬字真的有點恐怖，因為我的才一章1000字左右XD
目前看到第三章，看了一下最後，所以著反派真壞還是假壞
僥倖這點，妲還是心太大了，但凡有人小殺自己正常人有多遠跑多遠🤣
沒事沒事，你的文筆還敘事能力很強，歡迎來看我的小說ww
4 months agoReply
小邁
@白老鼠,你居然看到了第三章，感謝感謝🥹有空我去拜讀你的😆
4 months agoReply
白老鼠
@小邁謝謝XD我也會抽空把男校女色看完的
4 months agoReply
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