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小魚一尾
@wrighta6m5c
4 months agoReply
wrighta6m5c
嗚哇句點又被打了一次😅😅
但看起來除了這個以外文筆方面是沒什麼問題真是太好了😆😆這樣要重修的部分就好了很多（這裡是我的中期文風，如果這邊沒問題的話便只需要修前期文風的部分就好了～～
再次感謝您的心得～～
4 months agoReply
小魚一尾
@wrighta6m5c, 謝謝參加～
4 months agoReply
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