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小魚一尾
謝謝參加～男女主的相認問題很多人提過，一直想不到方式改，你的意見也讓我想到可以改的新方向，謝謝qwq
至於男主跟女主斷聯原因是陸明媽媽畢業去世這件事，而且陸明性子傲不想要被看得最落魄最痛苦的樣子跟一堆原因⋯⋯不過我也都沒有明寫，不知道這樣好不好，但看起來不是每個讀者都可以get 這種需要主觀解讀的間接暗示，我也承認這些非常主觀ww
最後再次謝謝你的意見～
6 months agoReply
七分熟
其實我蠻喜歡你寫的那一段男主他媽媽去世後，男主對女主的妒忌，有體現男主的陰暗面，我就愛這種劇情XD~不過可能可以鋪墊他不想往來的念頭，以及女主對於這一段關係突然斷聯的反應
6 months agoReply
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