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kikii
謝謝林墨大大的長評~
話說，「多視角POV」真的很難寫w，我剛開始寫的時候很怕獨白不符合角色性格，又怕自己稚嫩的文筆負荷不過來（但暫時看起來評價好像還好w
書名的背後都被猜出來了，嚴重懷疑大大是我肚子的蛔蟲w
至於場景的錨點是在說石台那裡嗎？
7 months agoReply
林墨
場景錨點是#6他們的學校。我覺得學校應該是很重要的點，可能因為是小鎮，伊芙林十年後也會在同一間中學就職，可以說是貫穿故事的重要場景，應該多一些描述。
7 months agoReply
kikii
@林墨, 關於這個點，伊芙琳是小鎮的小學老師，應該跟小鎮的中學沒什麼關聯，但學校確實是個重要場景，我會在後續的劇情多描寫的！
7 months agoReply
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