Yes... this indeed is a sad truth the women have to face in their everyday lives. Something that must be changed quickly. Lovely entry, made me remember all the girls out there (including myself) who had the same thoughts.
It's good, but perhaps that paragraph was a little too long? You need to give the readers some time to digest things, after all, they would strain their eyes and lose track multiple times in such a long entry.
And also, this can count as a disorder (anxiety, depression etc.), but it's way too common for everyone. Not what you would call a legitimate disorder.
It's good, but perhaps that paragraph was a little too long? You need to give the readers some time to digest things, after all, they would strain their eyes and lose track multiple times in such a long entry.
And also, this can count as a disorder (anxiety, depression etc.), but it's way too common for everyone. Not what you would call a legitimate disorder.
Thank you for your entry! It was wonderful!