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原子能
主角連捷運都沒坐過，看來他原本的世界非常原始或古風？這個細節不錯，加強了他異世界人的身分設定。
7 months agoReply
原子能

【橙江"尋"問】錯字=>橙江"詢"問。
【捷運站臺】繁體無誤=>但在台灣用法中通常稱為「捷運月"台"」，你注意一下報紙或新聞，都是用這個"台"。
7 months agoReply
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因為感覺這樣比較正式，改成月台了
7 months agoReply
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