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鈴鈴卷
修仙拿雙斧的還真是沒看過www
誰扔的爆竹！
2 months agoReply
渺兔
如果只是雙斧頭就嚇到，當你知道主角主要戰鬥方式是什麼……XD
2 months agoReply
渺兔
第四章的戰鬥應該是我目前小說中描寫最糟糕的，主要是為了快速帶過以蔣夜殤的故事，
把這場戰鬥寫得很高速魔法化，但由於是這麼早期的章節，也可能讓讀者誤認為我故事中的戰鬥描寫就是那麼糟的風險，因此今日修改以減少魔法感。
2 months agoReply
不知餘
鋪陳的很吸引人，很想繼續看下去。另讓我有點想起港漫黃玉郎的龍虎五世的世界，新武古武和機械等的世界觀，真是懷念。還有一點是封面圖和文中跟我想像中的澹臺月黎，非常有反差，和文中的搞笑點一樣，讓人印象深刻。
3 months agoReply
渺兔
感謝留言，好開心，
雖然沒看過您說的作品，不太理解您所表達的意思。
圖片僅供參考，以各位腦海中的想像為準唷XD
說起來我看別人小說時同樣往往也是人物想像出來後與插圖差距極大。
3 months agoReply
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