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洛々ka
三條時間線的跳動有點太快，建議中間主角的內心獨白加多一點。
但是一個小時一個小時慢慢過去總覺得越來越危險了...
怖い...
9 months agoReply
澪伊
好的！收到你的建議☺️🩵會在之後的章節努力改進✨
9 months agoReply
Anna Liu
一切就這樣剛好錯過了😔雖然已經在開頭知道咲希的結果，還是不忍心讓時間繼續邁進啊啊😭
9 months agoReply
澪伊
🥺抱抱……我自己寫也會寫到心疼😞
9 months agoReply
Yuki Selune
好慘啊 下一話女主要涼了
前面有點不流暢但後面越來越能抓住節奏
緊張感有出來！
大大繼續加油！
9 months agoReply
澪伊
緊張感有出來實在太好了☺️已經有一段時間沒寫作，所以寫作的手感慢慢回來了🤣謝謝你的支持🥺！！！🩵
9 months agoReply
黑靈
就是這個男生帶走咲希的！她的手機沒電了還是被強行關機？
9 months agoReply
澪伊
對的對的！就是這個男生帶走我們咲希🥺
9 months agoReply
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