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璐沐
不好意思我來晚了！
評語：
整篇文章偏向於科幻、哲理的風格。由複製者作為主角的題材也很新穎，後來被洗腦到不分是非的情節也非常有趣！
7 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
評語：這篇超像一本「寓言科幻短篇」，有點像卡夫卡或是村上春樹那種帶哲理的風格。複製者這個角色一開始很單純，但後來被洗腦到失去自我，這過程其實挺有震撼感的。

中間有些地方敘事稍微拖長，重複感比較重，讀起來會有點累。

結尾「夢中夢」+《未知》登場的地方最酷，有種「超現實收尾」的味道，讓人印象很深。
8 months agoReply
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