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看前半章的時候猜猜峘是外族王子🤔
他感覺是個很瀟灑的人呢～

大大太厲害啦😻馬球很有臨場感！脩哥跟張熙都很厲害也有默契！
還有很多詞語的用法好細膩
2 weeks agoReply
朝花夕拾
沒錯沒錯～微緲厲害有猜到～＾＾

謝謝呀，馬球這場戲寫了頗久啊...
2 weeks agoReply
我為九斗米折腰
不得不說，花大的文筆真的好❤️，不論是文言的深淺，世界的架構，古詞的用法等，可以看得出來真的做了很多的功課，respect！
1 month agoReply
朝花夕拾
謝謝折腰大大～^^希望你看得開心😍
1 month agoReply
我家的倉鼠會後空翻哦
原來一球定勝負欸，忒刺激了！
1 month agoReply
朝花夕拾
對！是一球定勝負，主要是作者沒能力再寫其他攻防劇本了XDD
1 month agoReply
黑心小兔
這段劇情寫的真好!
3 months agoReply
朝花夕拾
謝謝小兔！回顧以往，馬球這段真的是自己從想像的動作戲落實到文字，真的好難好難啊，但完成的時候，也很有成就感。原來自己真的可以做到～感謝妳！
3 months agoReply
林谷龍
我猜錯了，是脩贏了。

峘也坦率磊落，願賭服輸，將銀晝送出。
脩不奪人所好，事後返還，兩人都是謙謙君子。
5 months agoReply
朝花夕拾
谷龍兄也磊落😆😆
5 months agoReply
林谷龍
@朝花夕拾,多謝誇講。
5 months agoReply
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