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燃起來了！這段打戲寫得非常出色！屈少勤都快萬能了，主角光環，會讓緊張感在結尾處稍稍洩氣。讀者明白主角不會死，但過程可以更驚險一些。
8 months agoReply
羽璇 sponsored 350coins for Issue 5!
9 months agoReply
羽璇
這場打鬥真的寫得很不錯，有讓人身歷其境之感～
看下來很順，腦袋內也很有畫面

尤其是那個突然跳起來的刺客！真的嚇死人！很會演，若是沒注意到可能就真的葬送在這了！

不過我以為對方是針對屈少，看來連歌陵也都下得去手呢？總覺得背後勢力水很深啊…….

這團戰力真的不容小覷！
一戟直接命中，超可怕臂力XD
9 months agoReply
商澐
很會演🤣

我也被「突然跳起來」的留言嚇到了，謝謝羽姐
9 months agoReply
黑靈 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 5!
這場打鬥很精彩～
10 months agoReply
商澐
嗚哇哇，謝謝靈佬的肯定😭
10 months agoReply
黑靈
少勤害羞好可愛。刺客到底是誰派來的？
10 months agoReply
商澐
🤫秘密
10 months agoReply
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