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Comments - 【搞事】讓只有一點血的戰鬥狂讀者來翻書是否搞錯了什麼？（投稿區域） | Penana
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Comments - 【搞事】讓只有一點血的戰鬥狂讀者來翻書是否搞錯了什麼？（投稿區域）
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菜根
路過菜根流暢看完~到此一遊~
1 year agoReply
Happy喵
謝READ
1 year agoReply
諾蒂西亞
非常爽快流暢的戰鬥，雖然句子裏一些助字還有斟酌的空間，例如的、是，偶然會在同一句裏出現重複。

作者沒有花時間去解釋任何設定，沒有對技能的外觀或視覺效果作詳細描述。但即使兩人，還有敵人使用的魔法技能，屬性和視覺效果都不同，但憑空丟出來的各種東西都能呈現（尤其是空氣貓貓拳），運鏡調度也相當合理，實屬可貴。

故事在劇情方面的景切稍有卡頓，但亦可能只是從中節錄的問題。

（生還！）
1 year agoReply
Happy喵
哇哇謝謝意見
1 year agoReply
菜根
歡迎參戰~~~
1 year agoReply
Happy喵
頭痛
1 year agoReply
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