This is really good! I’m finding myself very attached to the characters and feeling cery immeresed. You clearly have a great talent for writing!
Just one thing though, is that i would suggest using speech marks when characters are talking. This would make it easier to tell if someone was talking or not.
Omg, thank you so much❤️❤️ You literally just made my day❤️❤️ Aso, thats strange because i put lines as dialogue… Why didnt the apo register them? Ill just go back and add them ig…
Just one thing though, is that i would suggest using speech marks when characters are talking. This would make it easier to tell if someone was talking or not.
Great story! Can’t wait to read more :D