Great job! I love the clear difference between the two groups, and how despite how much the Destroyers want to...well...destroy the Creators, they physically can't make weapons which causes almost a dependent relationship among each other.
Thank you! I really liked the idea that both sides had clear disadvantages to their ideologies, that the Creators were strictly pacifistic and could not fight back, however the Destroyers were so dominantly violent that they couldn’t create anything and were forced to steal from the Creators.
Our main character Keiji, who is part of the Destroyers, has different beliefs to the majority of his side. He doesn’t believe that one side is doing exactly the right thing, and that everyone’s lives would be better if both sides joined forces.
If Keiji were to express these ideas the his fellow Destroyers, he could be tortured or killed because of their violent and unreasonable tentencies, which is why he tends to keep his mouth shut.
Oops, i seem to have written quite a lot for a reply to a comment but I’m very glad that you like this idea because I do too! Sorry for the long and complicated words by the way, I have to write my college essay today, and I’m counting this as practice :D
Our main character Keiji, who is part of the Destroyers, has different beliefs to the majority of his side. He doesn’t believe that one side is doing exactly the right thing, and that everyone’s lives would be better if both sides joined forces.
If Keiji were to express these ideas the his fellow Destroyers, he could be tortured or killed because of their violent and unreasonable tentencies, which is why he tends to keep his mouth shut.
Oops, i seem to have written quite a lot for a reply to a comment but I’m very glad that you like this idea because I do too! Sorry for the long and complicated words by the way, I have to write my college essay today, and I’m counting this as practice :D