I'm going to be honest — I don't really like this story. I feel like there's something missing. The grammar is okay, just the story itself needs improvement. I need to know your thoughts. Thanks for reading!
It actually was really well written. I liked the personalities you gave both the rock and the lizard. It was cute and followed the prompt well. The thing I would say it's missing though is a plot. It simply seems to be just observations and conversations between the rock and lizard (although the lizard never really talks). In other words, there wasn't any conflict or any major events witnessed. You could say this piece was more of a slice-of-life story. It was still fun to read, but if I were to say what was missing, that would be it. Thank you for sharing, though. I still liked it a lot. :)