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守塔人
過了幾天才回不好意思（前兩天在夜班><）
很感謝喜歡作品，先說一點，大學不是這樣的啦（至少我上的不是啦）XD
關於字數冗長方面，一些重複的形容和句子我會再修改修改，不過大文本的冗長就有點尷尬，因為也不是第一個人有這樣的反映，只是在補充世界觀和人物心境的碰撞時，我習慣很扎實地呈現出來，希望後面能有更精練的文字表達。
4 months agoReply
晨星．死神
沒關係啦～書評不是急事～
大學不是這樣啊？其實一開始看的時候以為是高中，但看到科系我又以為是大學……
但這不影響劇情啦

總之謝謝你的參加～
4 months agoReply
守塔人
@晨星．死神,小說裡是大學沒錯，我是說真實的大學沒那麼勾心鬥角的啦哈哈
4 months agoReply
晨星．死神
@守塔人,噢……好像也是🤣黑梵塔是強化黑暗面的現實社會
4 months agoReply
晨星．死神
@守塔人
4 months agoReply
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