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早覺得蘇婆婆不是那麼簡單，果然如此。

但要埋下伏筆，相信應該一早便構思好，這也是不簡單，你是怎樣讓讀者感覺到她的不簡單？然後水到渠成的公開她的身份？
1 year agoReply
覺非(Benny Chan)
是的, 我很早便想到這個構思, 首先在第28章已公開過水中仙子的名字是蘇拉, 然後在35章婆婆出場時自稱姓蘇, 並擁有水藍色的眼珠, 不像漢人. 之後主角被水系魔法水龍卷救起後, 蘇婆婆便不見了. 

到了45章, 蘇婆婆口中說出電燈膽三個字, 並引起杏子注意, 更自稱來自遙遠的南方(南國).

 我覺得伏筆線索太多, 才刻意讓男主猜測婆婆來自雲南, 想掩人耳目, 多賣一下關子. XD
1 year agoReply
素素
@覺非(Benny Chan), 哇哈哈，我也早看到電燈胆這句話有問題，而且婆婆很明顯喜歡主角，果然是喬裝的！你給的提示太多啦！

不過杏子到底是不是主角前女友呢？好像是，但又有明確証據說不是，很難猜。
1 year agoReply
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