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筆璃~(≧▽≦)/~
放膠袋好有創意😆👍🏻
2 years agoReply
虛冲
有冇玩過或者見過？🤣
2 years agoReply
筆璃~(≧▽≦)/~
@虛冲, 無啊😝可惜，我細個知的話可能都會玩埋一份~(≧▽≦)/~哈哈
2 years agoReply
虛冲
@筆璃~(≧▽≦)/~, 可惜

有赤鱲角之後都已經冇得玩
2 years agoReply
水無月 楓
大人圍埋開雀局
膠袋巷尾隨風逐
獨自呆看它招搖
僅有回憶招感觸
2 years agoReply
虛冲
押入聲韻，特別有感觸嘅感覺。

而且順口流暢。👍🏼

唔好講咁多，乾杯🥃
2 years agoReply
水無月 楓
@虛冲,順口溜XD 過譽了🙈🙇🙇
2 years agoReply
虛冲
@水無月 楓, 詩本身咪就係咁形成架囉
2 years agoReply
虛冲
@水無月 楓, 詩本身咪就係咁形成架囉
2 years agoReply
水無月 楓
@虛冲,但我仍不太滿有兩個尾都是“足”音🙈
2 years agoReply
虛冲
@水無月 楓, 都ok嘅，唔同聲調唔同字
2 years agoReply
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