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素素
小鈴這麼幸福，詩詩卻總是那麼可憐，太不公平了。

謝非接下來要參戰了嗎？會變成戰爭小說？
1 year agoReply
你搵咗好多資料。好佩服！

如果我仔細咁睇嘅話，去考究嘅話都要用好多時間


1 year agoReply
覺非(Benny Chan)
是的, 雖然都是google資料, 但也要考慮如何取捨, 以免過多介紹, 令讀者覺得沉悶. 

至於主角提出的戰術, 我也要反覆修改, 分析可行性. 不能太完美, 又不想太窩囊. ^^"
1 year agoReply
@覺非(Benny Chan),辛苦了。

有空的話可以幫我看看《與拿破崙為敵》？我修改了不少，感謝你在香港時間這麼晚還幫我看小說，感激不盡。

我遲一點會再重新細看你的小說。感覺可以學習到很多東西
1 year agoReply
覺非(Benny Chan)
@俗子, 好, 沒問題, 謝謝你!
1 year agoReply
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