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玼瑕 sponsored 500coins for Issue 475!
《GACHIAKUTA》我覺得有點微妙，設定分開來看都不錯，但組合在一起卻顯得有點脫力煩躁。應該是敘事手法的問題……
4 months agoReply
黑霧
會覺得煩躁很有可能是主角人設導致，因為他就處於一個很煩躁的狀態，有點衝，只管奔向目標，會跟其他人衝突，而在衝突過程中看似有慢慢減緩（放緩），但又因為主線推動又變得更極端，這種一時一樣的反覆很不一致。
最主要的是，這主角很難說有什麼魅力或者討喜，除非本身喜歡這一類，否則吸引力頗低。



4 months agoReply
玼瑕
我是不覺得主角煩躁，他的成長環境壓抑扭曲，看他一點點改變成長其實還讓人有點期待……原本是這樣，但就有種劇情發展卡頓卡頓的，甚至其他角色也都有這種感覺，大部份角色的人設看起來都很有魅力，但一直等不到魅力發光的場面……＝w＝||||
4 months agoReply
黑霧
@玼瑕,ＸＤ好吧
在最後地底戰那邊算不錯啦，傘子哥的相信與突然來的葦名劍法都挺有意思
4 months agoReply
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