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嵐斕
@林墨
9 months agoReply
林墨
好，我會再出一個第三人稱視角版本，看會不會好一點。
而且看來我還寫的不夠好，謝謝指教。

我很需要這樣的意見。
9 months agoReply
嵐斕
@林墨,很高興能有所幫助(⁠.⁠ ⁠❛⁠ ⁠ᴗ⁠ ⁠❛⁠.⁠)
9 months agoReply
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