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玼瑕 sponsored 500coins for Issue 450!
這部比較被批評的，大概就家族恩怨政治陰謀寫得很簡略導致說服力不足(或許還可以加上最終Boss太快解決)，不過我也覺得這不是這部作品的賣點，就只是走個劇情流程XD
一個作品掌握住賣點好好發揮就很不錯了
9 months agoReply
黑霧
對，反而詳寫會斷了自己本來的節奏，而且又不容易寫好說不定寫爛ＸＤ

現在這樣挺好的，知道自己的方向，就賣這種服務給讀者，讀者要別的就去找別的書ＸＤ
9 months agoReply
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