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月隱飆塵
抱歉今天才找到時間來留言...

首先先感謝評文! 回應一下評文...
關於跫的作法，當時是依照我心裡模擬他的心態去想的，不過你提出的感覺也是個可行性很高的選項...我之後改長的時候會再多琢磨。
然後，很高興能夠成功傳達到最後的黑暗感!!!
4 years agoReply
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