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穹葉
其實我滿喜歡這篇的對比，不過艾爾叔是來玩耍的，內文敘述也相當白話（還有中二的味道w）所以我就不發什麼解釋了哈哈哈！

您老的詩筆拿得越來越穩妥啦~小葉嗅到了一絲絲危機的味道（其實不會）www
毀滅後總會有新生，而重生也不過等待下一次毀滅，乍看下是惡性循環，其實不然。這不過就是像生老病死一樣正常的自然循環罷了哈哈哈😀
其實多多少少也聞到了，「事情總有轉圜餘地」的味道，就看觀者們如何思想了:-)

最後嘛，天地聖戰之間，我選擇哪一方？
我選擇死亡哈哈哈哈哈哈哈！
天使或惡魔，都是我肩頭上的一塊肉啊(´∀｀)
7 years agoReply
穹葉
噗
一個狀聲詞表達了我的感想😂
7 years agoReply
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