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陽壽木魚
心得：

看到#1最新進度（#2好像重複到一點#1的部分了）+書籤

我個人覺得作者的行文相當⋯怎麼說，成熟？

然後寫的文字看起來很有質感，雖然感覺是異世界題材但我滿期待作者會怎麼寫下去（會不會女主跟她妹妹一起轉生 誤）

還有，開頭滿有趣的，不會看不下去，只是第一章以網路小說來說有點長。
9 months agoReply
謝謝陽壽木魚大大！！
9 months agoReply
其實我的目標明明是搞笑的輕小說，所以總是覺得奇奇怪怪，總之謝謝你，我會加油的！(╥﹏╥)
9 months agoReply
陽壽木魚
好的，我這就去看看
9 months agoReply
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