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老余頭
謝謝你的評論！本來覺得這部作品走輕鬆路線，看的人不多，正在多開各類型小說也在試水溫比較熱門的人性諷刺或懸疑題材(短篇)。但看到你的鼓勵，讓我有了繼續更新下去的信心。我會努力把這個故事寫完的，真的非常感謝！
4 months agoReply
晨星．死神
不客氣。
其實你的文筆很不錯,幾乎沒有冗言贅字,讀起來很順,完全沒有多餘的句子。

但由於你選擇模式一,所以,我就評狠一點了！
4 months agoReply
老余頭
@晨星．死神,比起我其他短篇作品這作品比較沒人再看所以對這作品比較沒信心。
4 months agoReply
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