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黑靈
哈哈哈，謝謝小魚評得相當煩惱的心得～
用語可能是因為，台灣和香港地區問題？而且是第一人稱寫法，所以可能你會看得怪怪？

吸血鬼就是第三人稱的寫法～

我也努力改善中（？

但多謝你推薦這部，辛苦評論了🤣
5 months agoReply
小魚一尾
可能是～所以黑靈是香港人嗎XD原來ww那可能是這個原因，第一人稱倒是還好，所以好像破案了？
5 months agoReply
黑靈
@小魚一尾,我是香港人呀，哈哈🤣🤣🤣我其實比較喜歡用第一人稱來寫作🤣文筆這東西，我沒有很在意🤣🤣🤣🤣你也不用擔心會影響到我～🤣
5 months agoReply
小魚一尾
@黑靈,我相較比較在意ww有賈島的執著沒他的實力
賈島：我這叫推敲，你那叫沒事找事
5 months agoReply
小魚一尾
@黑靈
5 months agoReply
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