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熊兒 sponsored 500coins for Issue 44!
感謝閱讀與提供心得🥹🥹🥹！

讓您開頭看到快靈魂出竅，不好意思😅😅…我刪減了不少一開始的設定，如您所提到的鬼差為何會呼吸這一類較基本的邏輯，不多解釋，試圖用這個時空裡人有陽氣，鬼有鬼氣的設定帶過XD 很怕塞入太多元素，會讓人花更多時間理解世界觀😅 

至於您提到的段落，第一個是巧蠻的回憶，後續才會對那段往事有更多著墨（也許我銜接還有加強空間🙏）

第二個是指鬼差與巧蠻講好的互利條件，所以才選用交涉而非交易。選字部分我也會再想一想斟酌！

  再次感謝您的閱讀心得🥹！
7 months agoReply
凝雨
神速！
7 months agoReply
交響J
@熊兒
7 months agoReply
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